Is this a good way to start my story? be honest please and suggest bttr names if you think they re needed!?

he was in my dream. i told jeimmy (jamie) as walked home from the library late at night. again? she asked not really interested skimming thro her book she just got. yeah...i keep thinking maybe ive met him before but i know i didnt...i wouldve remembered...i mumbled fustrated and threw my arms out making me drop my phone. it skidded into a dark alley, just my luck. i thought bitterly as i ran to get it. Desomona? what are you doing? jeimmy asked. getting my phon- i started to say but looked up to see him standing there. he smirked at my shocked expresion and held a paper out to me then seemed to just disappear right behind my eyes. i picked it up to see it was a flier for a freak show. Cirque de unique.