What grage do you think I will get on this A+-F-?

uming you're probably in middle school, you should get a decent grade on this paper, despite what everyone else is telling you. I think you tried to write this well, you just aren't a very strong writer yet, but considering the garbage most people write at middle school age, I'm sure you have potential. In your introductory paragraph, try not to repeat yourself so much. Like the sentence, "Harold is a old dog and is a great dog that is a family pet." Instead you could say, "Harold is the Monroe's elderly dog." The sentence is shorter, but it stell conveys the message more eloquently. So try to cut out things that don't need to be said. Also, I noticed you were missing a lot of punctuation. I have a problem with putting to many commas in things, and you seem to have a problem with not putting in any commas. Just know where there is a break in your sentences that neeeds to be seperated with a comma.If this is just a rough draft, then have your teacher look at it, and tell you how you can improve.